At All Costs
At All Costs ________________________________________This takes place immediately after Heath joins the Barkley's. That would be after POG and before 40 Rifles. So far it is following story order, but...
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Wonderful start to your story! You have written Heath's tension and uncertainty about trying to fit in perfectly. and
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Good start. I just love all Heath stories and you seem to have the brooding young man described well. I often think they should have dragged out his acceptance into the family a little more as it was...
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I'm so glad you're continuing this fine story, Jana. Stories of Heath's early days with the Barkleys are my favorite theme, and I know this will be a great one!!!!
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Though I am quite sure Nick will come around, I thought you did a good job writing the tension and internal conflict. This was especially good, showing your powers of description that helped me "see"...
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I like this story too. You give Nick's actions credibility, his doubts and his worry that his family is being hurt. I like the insight into Heath's thoughts.
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This is such a difficult and awkward time for everyone. I feel for both Nick and Heath ... Nick trying to protect his family, and Heath desperate to find a place to belong. How far will he be able to...
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You pulled me straight into your story and now I'm completely hooked, the fact that you've chosen to write about my favourite time...Heath's early days at the ranch...only adds to my enjoyment!! I...
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Like Maisie, I was pulled right into your story. I think you've captured Nick's doubts and temperment perfectly, as well as Heath's unsureness and lack of confidence in this early period of his being...
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Jana Welcome Back! I remember this story a little bit and I'm so happy to see it here again. I liked the view of the Barkley family through Heath's eyes. You do a terrific job of showing us how...
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I wish I could write like that. Great job!! Please hurry back and give us more! Christy
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I second Christy..wish I could write like that too! I like stories that deal with Heath's early days as a Barkley and this story has been outstanding so far. You get a real sense of Heath's...
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